tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3652337415919692273.post2529676479825063147..comments2024-02-02T18:01:09.778+00:00Comments on Year 4 blog: Big Write Star Writer is ...Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3652337415919692273.post-33696342512653118792012-05-01T14:45:13.940+01:002012-05-01T14:45:13.940+01:00i got no votes but i had to help LukeA bailey i w...i got no votes but i had to help LukeA bailey i want to say well done!!!LukeCnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3652337415919692273.post-87514223845647624472012-04-29T14:01:23.371+01:002012-04-29T14:01:23.371+01:00Hello Year 4,
What a wonderful task Mr Corbett se...Hello Year 4,<br /><br />What a wonderful task Mr Corbett set for you. Being invited to write the second part of a story involves you all in his imagination and invites you to stretch your own imaginations to complete the story.<br /><br />From the part 2 stories I've read, I can see how much thought you all have put into your work. Well done, everyone. :)<br /><br />@RossMannell<br />Teacher, NSW, Australiarmannellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325881715643049499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3652337415919692273.post-78260788975885569752012-04-24T21:17:17.076+01:002012-04-24T21:17:17.076+01:00I enjoyed listening to your story bailey It was gr...I enjoyed listening to your story bailey It was great.joshuanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3652337415919692273.post-69292167193869959032012-04-23T19:45:59.169+01:002012-04-23T19:45:59.169+01:00well done bailey your story was amazing I liked ho...well done bailey your story was amazing I liked how you said 'and the people lived in joyful harmony'ellenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3652337415919692273.post-74019722550696602382012-04-23T19:39:01.593+01:002012-04-23T19:39:01.593+01:00me and my partner dicussed that he needed to read ...me and my partner dicussed that he needed to read it through to check it made sense beacuse parts of it didn't make sense and we had to add a few bits in to make sure the rader understood what he was on about.ellenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3652337415919692273.post-75432991940756926302012-04-23T19:17:43.734+01:002012-04-23T19:17:43.734+01:00welldone baily i must admit it was a fab story.
f...welldone baily i must admit it was a fab story.<br /><br />from ElaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3652337415919692273.post-53162526990337071542012-04-23T19:16:16.943+01:002012-04-23T19:16:16.943+01:00me and my partner discussed what i needed to do to...me and my partner discussed what i needed to do to inprove it we both thought that my opening was boring and there were thing that were changed when they did not need to be changed.<br /><br />from ElaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com