Every Monday in Year 4 we always recap on the Big Write task. We use this time to edit and improve our work. This week the children had to write a letter to Mr Edensor to persuade him to abandon the school uniform.
In pairs the children had a go at peer assessing work using VCOP colours.
Here they are busy at work.
A conversation between Alice and Elle;
Alice: That's a brilliant use of vocabulary Elle
Elle: Which word?
Alice: "consideration"
Elle: Thanks
Can you remember any good features of the work you marked?
In pairs the children had a go at peer assessing work using VCOP colours.
Here they are busy at work.
A conversation between Alice and Elle;
Alice: That's a brilliant use of vocabulary Elle
Elle: Which word?
Alice: "consideration"
Elle: Thanks
Can you remember any good features of the work you marked?
Don't know if I dare come in tomorrow as your openings for the Haunted House were scaring me!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love big write edit and improve hannah
ReplyDeletebig write is brill i love when you get to do big write edit
ReplyDeleteI loved it by Abbie
ReplyDeleteso did I by teegan
ReplyDeleteme too i like big write edit too i think its cool
ReplyDeleteI love doing big write too its grait teegan
ReplyDeleteI really liked were we marked the person sat next to yous work it was cool, better than marking your own work.
ReplyDeleteSinse big wright has been intdorootst to the scool I love fridays evan more and I also thinc when we all sit down for big wright it is nice and pise full and it makes it evan better.
ReplyDeletefrom ela xxxxxxx
i love big write
ReplyDeleteso i did by chloe
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