Monday, 14 November 2011

BIG WRITE Star writer of the week is ......

Amber

Amber is the Star writer because she has written a brilliant persuasive letter to Mr Edensor suggesting he abandons the school uniform. She organised her writing very well, including letter writing features, emotive language and backed up her opinion.

Great work Amber!

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Posted by Miss Stockton at 4:16 pm
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14 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 November 2011 at 14:40

    welldone amber

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  2. Anonymous15 November 2011 at 14:41

    welldone amber I wonder who is the next big write I hope it is me Abbie

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  3. elle15 November 2011 at 14:42

    well done amber you deserved to be the star writer you always try your best well done

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  4. olivia15 November 2011 at 14:43

    well done Amber I cant belive you are the big write star i am really proud of you well done.

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  5. Anonymous15 November 2011 at 14:44

    weel done amber i wonder who will be the next star wrighter

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  6. Anonymous15 November 2011 at 14:44

    hi miss woner well done aber i am prawd i am glad that your the stare writer of the week from alyssa

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  7. Anonymous15 November 2011 at 14:45

    well done amber you did good christopher

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  8. chloe15 November 2011 at 14:46

    well done abber it was realy good and netly prenstaniond

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  9. Anonymous15 November 2011 at 19:14

    i layc yor big write aber from alyssa

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  10. Anonymous15 November 2011 at 19:16

    nice work aber i lcit so moch from alyssa

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  11. Anonymous16 November 2011 at 16:58

    welldone amber you realy deservd it

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  12. Anonymous17 November 2011 at 14:11

    thank you for all them coments yr4 i apresiate them i hope all you get to be a star writer too some day so i can coment on about how fab i like your work from amber xxx

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  13. Anonymous17 November 2011 at 14:14

    welldone aber i am prawd from alyssa

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  14. Hannah18 November 2011 at 08:25

    well done

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