Amber
Amber is the Star writer because she has written a brilliant persuasive letter to Mr Edensor suggesting he abandons the school uniform. She organised her writing very well, including letter writing features, emotive language and backed up her opinion.
welldone amber
ReplyDeletewelldone amber I wonder who is the next big write I hope it is me Abbie
ReplyDeletewell done amber you deserved to be the star writer you always try your best well done
ReplyDeletewell done Amber I cant belive you are the big write star i am really proud of you well done.
ReplyDeleteweel done amber i wonder who will be the next star wrighter
ReplyDeletehi miss woner well done aber i am prawd i am glad that your the stare writer of the week from alyssa
ReplyDeletewell done amber you did good christopher
ReplyDeletewell done abber it was realy good and netly prenstaniond
ReplyDeletei layc yor big write aber from alyssa
ReplyDeletenice work aber i lcit so moch from alyssa
ReplyDeletewelldone amber you realy deservd it
ReplyDeletethank you for all them coments yr4 i apresiate them i hope all you get to be a star writer too some day so i can coment on about how fab i like your work from amber xxx
ReplyDeletewelldone aber i am prawd from alyssa
ReplyDeletewell done
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