Monday, 21 November 2011

BIG WRITE Star writer of the week is ......

Keaton


Fantastic work Keaton, your story opening was excellent! Great use of vocabulary too.
I especially liked how you showed the passing of time to add detail to the story.

Here is a game. Let me know how you get on.

Posted by Miss Stockton at 12:48 pm
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11 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 November 2011 at 14:39

    well done keaton you did good christopher

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  2. alyssa21 November 2011 at 14:43

    well done kiten I am pwad of yuo from alyssa

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  3. Anonymous21 November 2011 at 14:43

    well done keaton I loved the opening hannah

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  4. Grace Yr422 November 2011 at 13:31

    Well done keaton im very proud of you your work was brilliant:).

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  5. maryam22 November 2011 at 13:37

    your story was great.well done Keaton!

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  6. Olivia22 November 2011 at 13:39

    well done keaton i am proud.

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  7. Anonymous22 November 2011 at 13:43

    I'm proud of myself keaton

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  8. kel and elle22 November 2011 at 13:46

    well done keaton

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  9. Anonymous22 November 2011 at 13:47

    well done keton I nethar thorght that you would win you have done us proud espeshaly mrs waner fromela

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  10. Anonymous1 December 2011 at 09:49

    welldone keaton :) Abbie

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  11. Anonymous6 April 2012 at 11:28

    well done keton you realy desurvd it

    from ela

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