Monday, 8 October 2012

Big Write star writer is...

William

Well done William, you are our first Big Write Star! 

William produced a super recount of a birthday party, he included some time connectives and exciting vocabulary to describe the food he enjoyed.

Here is a game to try, see if you can use your new knowledge to complete the activity.



There is also a quiz to try too. Play it here and let me know how you get on.
Posted by Miss Stockton at 7:07 pm
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10 comments:

  1. Mrs Stones8 October 2012 at 21:09

    Well done William for being the first Big Write Star in Year 4. It sounds like you included all the important features of a recount in your writing.
    Mrs Stones

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  2. Anonymous9 October 2012 at 10:23

    well dun williiam .


    you deserve it william

    from tullyanne

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  3. Anonymous10 October 2012 at 14:22

    WELL DONE WILLIAM KEEP IT UP.
    FROM MEGAN

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    1. Anonymous11 October 2012 at 20:23

      I think it to Megan and I hope he is next time.


      From Tullyanne

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  4. Anonymous10 October 2012 at 14:23

    well don william






    dylan

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  5. Anonymous10 October 2012 at 14:24

    Hi Mrs.Warner this is Callum, William deserved to be the big write star because he described the food fantastically plus he did a full page of writing, he has never done that befor, well at least not that quick I'm as proud of him as you are miss.




    From Callum

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  6. Anonymous12 October 2012 at 09:44

    WELL DONE WILLAM FOR BEEN THE BIG STAR WRITER. MEGAN

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  7. rmannell14 October 2012 at 13:28

    William, congratulations on being selected as the first Big Write Star for the new school year. :)

    @RossMannell
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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  8. Anonymous15 October 2012 at 09:33

    well done william keep up the good work




    from michaela

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  9. Anonymous15 October 2012 at 13:38

    Well Done WIlliam, I am so very proud of you

    Lots of love and huggles
    Mum xxx

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