If you're looking for Talk homework.... there isn't any.
Tomorrow we will be playing some VCOP games, up levelling some sentences and creating some ing-ly openers.
But if you fancy something to do tonight, here is the new 100 word challenge prompt.
Try and write a creative story linked to this item.
i like talk home work but saves me doing big write tomorro but i like myst and vcop i like myst111 best
ReplyDeletethat sounds good mrs warner playing vcop games
ReplyDeletehere is my 100 work challenge
ReplyDeleteIts......
pointy ,
spiky,
round,
prickly,
vast,
dull colours,
full of different shape,
Barron(plain),
Here is a sentence to describe it ;
As my eyes locked up on this vast circler plain pointy item I began to wonder what it was ?.
I didn't complete it but at lease I did a bit.
Keep going Grace, I think you can do it.
DeleteI cant wait for us to play the vcop games
ReplyDeletegood i rote about big right i wiil try and get my mum on
ReplyDeleteon sliving street lived a women called Lola who loved going for walks, one day she was just getting her shoes on and opened her front door and set of as usual when she stumbled across something hard and jagged then she looked down she saw a big round wooden woven bolder when she looked back up ,there was a big fat witch 'that's mine get out of my way slug' said the which and the which pushed Lola out of the way sorry sorry said Lola actually have I met you before said Lola yes I think so said the which 'OK' said Lola anyway I have a sister whose a which said Lola or so we have something in common then said the which I never have anything in common with any one said the which and from that day on the which and the women where best friends but sooner rather than later they both found out that they where sisters.
ReplyDeleteThis is super Alice, can you read it through and edit it so it's 100 words long? I will enter it in the 100wc competition.
Deletevcop games are really fun I like them
ReplyDeleteiv tried my best but I can not do it
ReplyDeleteWhy don't you pop over to the 100wc website and have a look at some of the entries. You might get some inspiration.
Deletewe have all started the 100 word chalenge
ReplyDeleteit is tricy
As my eyes locked up on this vast circler plain pointy item I began to wonder what it was I though it was just a dream until ...I got a BANG at my door there it were again this item couldn't of travelled from the maze and back the maze was extremely long what could I do I cant tell my mum shell think im going coo coo, Ill have to tell lola tomorrow when she comes, when I showed lola this items it started to glow iI was amazed when we went inside it shocked us as it...
ReplyDeleteTOO BE CONTINUED
Mrs warner how do I enter ?
ReplyDeleteFantastic work Grace, just count the words again, I think there's two too many. Edit it and re-post and I will enter it for you.
DeleteI am sorting the 100wc blog now so that everyone will have an account and will be able to directly post onto it. I will have user names for you all on Monday.
I am so proud of you for being the first person to have a go.
Check you email Grace, I have sent you the information you need.
Deleteone chilly night elle decided to go exploring with her friend who just so happened to be staying at her house that night while she was out she stumbled across a jagged pile of bones grace come here i've found something what is it grace shouted i don't know thats why i'm asking you to come here it looks weird lets take it to your house and check it out so the girls carefully picked it up and suddenly it started to glow they dropped it immediately and ran home as fast as there legs would carry them lets go back tommorrow with your mum and thats what they did
ReplyDeleteto be continued ................
1oo word challenge
ReplyDeleteone evening when every 1 was in bed every 1 but sept the creach who lived in the scotland museum every night he would go missing he would go back into his own world which would mean the creacher would set off down to the dark green wood and to a box that glowed like the sun.One night sally and tom went to the wood and when they saw a glow they creeped to it and went wow I have never seen this befor so they took it home and hid it be hind the large green swing.