Bailey
Well done Bailey, you worked very hard on your non-chronological report about Egypt. In it you discussed the differences between poor and rich children and you also named many Egyptian Gods.
Over the week we will all be working to improve the first draft.
See if you can make your own information book here
well done
ReplyDeletewelldone baily. i wonder who will be the next star writer teegan
ReplyDeleteWell done Bailey you should be really proud of yourself you did really well and you got lots of facts about Egypt . your writing was really neat I can't believe it although it was just one page it was really good and very very neat too well done.
ReplyDeletewelldone bailey don't take too much credit though because even you have to improve it
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