Friday, 15 February 2013

Improving our writing

What have you learned in literacy this week?

Click here to go to a wallwisher and prove you can write a rainbow sentence.  (all posts are moderated)

1 comment:

  1. Hello Year 4,

    I find your work fascinating. It can be quite surprising how much of a difference a few select words can make to a grey sentence. It made me wonder how I might add some colour to a basic sentence.

    The man walked down the street.

    With a gait slowed by the loss of youth, slowly the man with no hint of colour left in his hair walked unsteadily down the tree lined street ignored by all but a small dog cautiously following him.

    Writing is fun. The more we write, the better we get. It’s like learning to play a sport. We need practise but, unlike sport where a game comes and goes, we can keep our writing forever and share our experiences with the world.

    Keep writing. Who knows what great stories you might one day write. :)

    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia