Monday 8 October 2012

Big Write star writer is...

William

Well done William, you are our first Big Write Star! 

William produced a super recount of a birthday party, he included some time connectives and exciting vocabulary to describe the food he enjoyed.

Here is a game to try, see if you can use your new knowledge to complete the activity.



There is also a quiz to try too. Play it here and let me know how you get on.

10 comments:

  1. Well done William for being the first Big Write Star in Year 4. It sounds like you included all the important features of a recount in your writing.
    Mrs Stones

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  2. well dun williiam .


    you deserve it william

    from tullyanne

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  3. WELL DONE WILLIAM KEEP IT UP.
    FROM MEGAN

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    1. I think it to Megan and I hope he is next time.


      From Tullyanne

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  4. well don william






    dylan

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  5. Hi Mrs.Warner this is Callum, William deserved to be the big write star because he described the food fantastically plus he did a full page of writing, he has never done that befor, well at least not that quick I'm as proud of him as you are miss.




    From Callum

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  6. WELL DONE WILLAM FOR BEEN THE BIG STAR WRITER. MEGAN

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  7. William, congratulations on being selected as the first Big Write Star for the new school year. :)

    @RossMannell
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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  8. well done william keep up the good work




    from michaela

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  9. Well Done WIlliam, I am so very proud of you

    Lots of love and huggles
    Mum xxx

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