Tuesday 15 November 2011

Big write "edit and improve" session

Every Monday in Year 4 we always recap on the Big Write task. We use this time to edit and improve our work. This week the children had to write a letter to Mr Edensor to persuade him to abandon the school uniform.
In pairs the children had a go at peer assessing work using VCOP colours.
Here they are busy at work.







A conversation between Alice and Elle;

Alice: That's a brilliant use of vocabulary Elle
Elle: Which word?
Alice: "consideration"
Elle: Thanks

Can you remember any good features of the work you marked?

11 comments:

  1. Don't know if I dare come in tomorrow as your openings for the Haunted House were scaring me!!!!!

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  2. I love big write edit and improve hannah

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  3. big write is brill i love when you get to do big write edit

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  4. I loved it by Abbie

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  5. so did I by teegan

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  6. me too i like big write edit too i think its cool

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  7. I love doing big write too its grait teegan

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  8. I really liked were we marked the person sat next to yous work it was cool, better than marking your own work.

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  9. Sinse big wright has been intdorootst to the scool I love fridays evan more and I also thinc when we all sit down for big wright it is nice and pise full and it makes it evan better.


    from ela xxxxxxx

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  10. so i did by chloe

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