Monday 21 November 2011

BIG WRITE Star writer of the week is ......

Keaton


Fantastic work Keaton, your story opening was excellent! Great use of vocabulary too.
I especially liked how you showed the passing of time to add detail to the story.

Here is a game. Let me know how you get on.

11 comments:

  1. well done keaton you did good christopher

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  2. well done kiten I am pwad of yuo from alyssa

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  3. well done keaton I loved the opening hannah

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  4. Well done keaton im very proud of you your work was brilliant:).

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  5. your story was great.well done Keaton!

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  6. well done keaton i am proud.

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  7. I'm proud of myself keaton

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  8. well done keaton

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  9. well done keton I nethar thorght that you would win you have done us proud espeshaly mrs waner fromela

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  10. welldone keaton :) Abbie

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  11. well done keton you realy desurvd it

    from ela

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