Monday 12 December 2011

Big Write star writer of the week is ..

Alice

Well done Alice, we are really proud of your super work. Not only did you produce an excellent explanation of your invention but today in the edit and improve session, you made your work even better.

Alice's invention

This is how it works
Alice used her imagination and designed a very unusual and interesting machine. If you look closely you can see how it is powered.

We visited Wallace and Gromit's website  http://www.crackingideas.com and had a go at the Sprocket Rocket game. To play it click here

We are going to spend the rest of the week finding out about explanation texts and designing some more inventions.

It's going to be lots of fun.

5 comments:

  1. I loved your invention alice it was that unushal i want one of them from Hannah

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  2. well done alice you duserv it lice hannha said it it is verry verry verry verry unushal I would lice one to .

    from ela xxx

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  3. welldone alice your invention was great

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  4. well done alice after all these weeks you are the big write star i hope you are very proud of your self

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  5. welldone alice from Abbie

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