Monday 17 October 2011

BIG WRITE Star writer of the week is ......

Alyssa



Alyssa produced a well organised recount of a birthday party she went to.

Alyssa used a combination of good vocabulary, openers, connectives and punctuation.

Here is a game to help you remember the features of writing a recount.

Let me know how you get on.
Posted by Miss Stockton at 3:38 pm
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 October 2011 at 12:33

    Hie mrs waner WELL DONE ALYSSA for your great worc I am prowd of you from ela xxx

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  2. Anonymous18 October 2011 at 16:25

    well done hannah

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  3. joshua18 October 2011 at 17:48

    yes alyssa welldone i proud of you i new u would be it because u always concentrate im glad ur the star writer welldone from joshua

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  4. Grace yr4 x18 October 2011 at 20:38

    well done alyssa your work was brilliant im proud that your in my class and that you was the big star writer well done i was shocked that you was the star writer im glad you used vocabulary connectives openners and punchuwashion well done xxx

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  5. Anonymous21 October 2011 at 15:02

    hie mrs waner and well done alyssa from ela xxx

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  6. Anonymous10 November 2011 at 12:50

    welldone jaydon by abbie

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