Friday, 22 June 2012

Big Writing task - Adverts

The Big Write task was to produce an advert for one of the six items we are selling in Warner-mart.

Have the children remembered any of the features we have discussed this week?

Leave some feedback, maybe a star and a wish.

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Which product would you buy and why? 

What persuaded you to buy it?

Who is the target audience?

7 comments:

  1. Hi year 4!!

    I really enjoyed looking at your adverts!!

    *I loved how eye catching the titles and pictures are!

    *You've used some fantastic persuasive language to encourage met to want to buy your products!!

    Wish: If they were put onto billboards...how could you make the text stand out even more to people driving or walking by?

    I wonder who will be producing the future Marks and Spencer advert!
    Miss Morris x

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  2. These big write,s look awesome well done all of you.

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  3. Hello Year 4,

    Your ads all look wonderful. You seem to have understood how to draw people's attention to what is being sold. Graphics to show the item, bright colours, larger text to highlight price and features, and a good layout catch the eyes of customers are always great techniques.

    @RossMannell
    Teacher, NSW, Australia

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  4. I have to agree completely with Mr Mannell. You really have a good grasp of how to persuasive language to engage the reader. Also - your designs stand out, something that is very important in advertising. Well done everyone.

    Mr Harrison
    Headteacher
    Miriam Lord Primary School, Bradford.

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  5. I loved then advert making in big write i wish we could do it ever time

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  6. Ela & Joshua25 June 2012 at 10:00

    I loved our big write it was great. we did the gun game that had an iphone on top
    it looks like a very cool and we would love to have it

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  7. Our favourite picture was the Barbie fairy doll because we like barbie.


    By Germany and Esther xx

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